Thursday, 29 August 2019

Cross country.

Last week we had our cross country And here is some wrting
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  1. Anonymous6 September 2019 at 12:57

    I like the color on the cross country.

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    1. Anonymous18 September 2019 at 11:26

      Thank you Kevahn for looking on my blog and commenting.
      By Sean.

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  2. Anonymous9 September 2019 at 12:58

    I like the ways you put your sentences in and how you described it. I found really cool and interesting.

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    1. Anonymous18 September 2019 at 11:30

      Hello Garcia it's Sean,
      Thank you for the advice.

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  3. Anonymous18 September 2019 at 12:03

    Hi Sean, it's Indi here from Karoro School. I really like your cross country presentation! It is very well presented. It reminds me of when we did our cross country except ours is just running. I wish we could do a waterslide! It sounds like you had fun. Maybe next time you could do more than one slide so you can have more writing. Kai Pai to tuhituhi. Ma Te Wa! If you would like to see my blog go to:http://karoroindirar.blogspot.com/

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  4. Anonymous16 October 2019 at 11:44

    I Indi thank you for commenting on my work

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  5. Anonymous29 October 2019 at 09:16

    G'day mate I like the way you used some of your senses like i felt, heard and heard.

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  6. Anonymous13 November 2019 at 11:27

    Thank you Luca

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  7. Anonymous20 November 2019 at 11:24

    hi sean it's maddy
    i like your work i can see that you have pot lots of efit into this
    you did a great job

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